I love reading your stuff, always looking forward to it when it drops in my email. But I have to say in my opinion, this is your finest piece yet. This one hit me hard. I read it a few times over. I'm not a fan of football, that wasn't it. It was the writing, the raw personal honesty, the meaning and the poetry of the whole piece. It sucked me right in, like music. It reminded me of the Beat religious writing. Not fluffy new age, instead real raw gritty spiritual awareness and an unfiltered image of the world. Thanks for taking the time to send this.
thank you jimmy i really appreciate your comment / all we have is love to support us / the outer world and the inner world / one is bizarre conditional and full of pharmaceutical commercials and the other is where we find our comfort and we can share love / thank you for sharing yours
oh good i'm glad i'm not the only one / hope your draft makes it to the light of day / sometimes they have to gestate for awhile until they're fully formed
I love reading your stuff, always looking forward to it when it drops in my email. But I have to say in my opinion, this is your finest piece yet. This one hit me hard. I read it a few times over. I'm not a fan of football, that wasn't it. It was the writing, the raw personal honesty, the meaning and the poetry of the whole piece. It sucked me right in, like music. It reminded me of the Beat religious writing. Not fluffy new age, instead real raw gritty spiritual awareness and an unfiltered image of the world. Thanks for taking the time to send this.
hi again / i just found this story referenced in a book i'm reading 'talking to the moon' about osage territory in oklahoma https://bennythomas.wordpress.com/2015/02/12/our-ladys-juggler-a-short-story-by-anatole-france-2/ i thought of you : )
thank you jimmy i really appreciate your comment / all we have is love to support us / the outer world and the inner world / one is bizarre conditional and full of pharmaceutical commercials and the other is where we find our comfort and we can share love / thank you for sharing yours
Ooo ABC 123
Great spoken words
yes and columbus discovered the new world where 50 million people were living / i was a thoroughly programmed little boy
“Watching my life unwind, hunted by mortality, that stealthy, persistent and supremely confident hunter” Love this analogy.
I listened to this driving home from a Reiki session. Your soft acceptance of how life unwinds is a balm.
I think I join you watching the garden, noting the slant of the sun.
thank you my friend / i appreciate your support and kindness / life unwinds / shadows grow long / here we are
I like this a lot, Rohn. I watch football at the gym when I do cardio. Yes, in the commercials everyone has trucks and vacations and greasy food!
I'm less inclined or inspired to write lately, though I did pop out a draft last night that might make it out.
I'm glad you share your thoughts. And groovy tunes.
oh good i'm glad i'm not the only one / hope your draft makes it to the light of day / sometimes they have to gestate for awhile until they're fully formed
I waver between allowing maturity or spontaneity!